NEC Senior Graphic Design Portfolio 2020

This is a work in progress look at my website so far:  https://crow-montani.wixsite.com/portfolio The pieces are not in order yet and that link is not the final one as I'll be buying my domain name soon. The links aren't all set up yet so I really just need feedback on the home page right now.

HI, I Create my 1st Online Portfolio Website with Crevado. It's really simple and super-easy to showcase my graphic design and digital illustration work.   https://gregadesign.crevado.com/

I made changes to my portfolio it's still in the process phase. please give me your feedback.  Greg A https://indd.adobe.com/view/717a5130-4bec-47fc-986d-b5273b88c7dc

Hello! Here is a link to my photobook I'm working on for my thesis. Not everything is quite there yet, but let me know what you think! https://issuu.com/lexiconsentino/docs/draft_numba_threeeee I'm specifically looking to see: what story it seems to be telling if it's consistent if it's repetitive if it's missing something if it's hitting you over the head with something Thanks so much! Lexi